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Marcy ROGERS's avatar

No. It was perfect and if I had read this blind, I would have thought it was written by a woman. Best of all was that it was a perfectly balanced tragic comedy that took its concept to its logical conclusion. It leaves me thinking wow.

Stephen Prime's avatar

Thank you, Marcy. I take that as one of the highest compliments I've ever received! I wrote this so long ago now, I'm glad to share it again.

M. Majeris's avatar

I think if she would've drawn a line she wouldn't cross at taking a shower and brushing teeth (you know the same stuff us dudes do), she would've been fine.

Seriously tho, makeup freaks me out. If women asked me, I'd tell them to save their time/money/ozone layer. And armpit hair is ewww regardless of gender.

Barbro (aka Moa)'s avatar

No yeah it’s cathartic to just think “fuck it” which I’ve largely done. I’m very lucky to move in circles where body hair and lazy styling and no make up is not a big obstacle to me.